tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22566066.post8871841412136674142..comments2024-02-19T16:20:08.130-06:00Comments on almost literary: AdviceKhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01653535953278952618noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22566066.post-58957366881644246412008-12-12T18:27:00.000-06:002008-12-12T18:27:00.000-06:00Well, that went well. NOT. Just kidding, I did w...Well, that went well. NOT. Just kidding, I did what I could--my friend is my friend and I can't turn it into me writing it (as if that would get my friend anywhere!!!). But I stayed true to what I thought. And what you all thought. I think the essay is better for it.Khttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01653535953278952618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22566066.post-70838847122205598402008-12-06T17:34:00.000-06:002008-12-06T17:34:00.000-06:00I completely agree.We're all insecure.Seriously.I completely agree.<BR/><BR/>We're all insecure.<BR/>Seriously.JUST MEhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15663723046451628228noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22566066.post-41232419484767454152008-12-04T02:11:00.000-06:002008-12-04T02:11:00.000-06:00Rip it to shreds. If she's gonna succeed in the b...Rip it to shreds. If she's gonna succeed in the business world, she's gotta be TOUGH!jonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04792911513851630838noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22566066.post-72319035924055516382008-12-02T12:27:00.000-06:002008-12-02T12:27:00.000-06:00that sounds good. Damnit I am a WRITER! I can fi...that sounds good. Damnit I am a WRITER! I can fix anything!<BR/><BR/>right? right?<BR/><BR/>Well, at least I have to try...<BR/><BR/>Good advice CB. I'm taking it.Khttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01653535953278952618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22566066.post-76840033019497297562008-12-02T12:19:00.000-06:002008-12-02T12:19:00.000-06:00You can still give her meaningful revisions withou...You can still give her meaningful revisions without telling her to sink the entire essay. You are a writer! She sent the essay to you because she trusts you and knows word manipulation is your industry. If it's not too late, share your thoughts, 24 hours is totally enough time for a turn-around. <BR/><BR/>Curiously enough, I was in this exact same situation last night - my little brother is applying to college. He came to me with an essay that was due the next day, I suggested a few things, he changed the opening and the conclusion - twice as good!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com